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He comes close to him; drawn to his edge
He pulls him in with gravity, lovely passion,
In moment, they’d embrace each other,
Come, come, and in other words make love,
They will make love across the sky!
Oh what sweet love-once in a few times-
His warmth would fill the coldness in his mind-
Oh how great!-Eight minutes or so of love!

Hot, hot, hot flames burned him now;
Very hot flames burned his cold,
Front- and his front must have felt-
Freezing to his hot rods that coiled around him no,
In this is paradise! Eight minutes or so;
Time- the cruel villain of this story-
Seeks to spate them; when they glow in
Pleasure- the pleasure of love-
He must pull till the next cycle

He pulls away gently;
Swings in space around the waist-
Departing from the heat of his lover-
And returns to the cold fronts of her—
Earthly shadows, in solitude for months to come…
Lloro (I Cry) by Normk777
Lloro (I Cry)
When you think that mournful song that just makes your cry; I want to sing along with wholly with my pain just drifting the tears away. --Cuando se piensa en esa canción triste que sólo hace que su clamor; quiero cantar junto con su totalidad con mi dolor a la deriva las lágrimas.
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Normk777
Ivan Pineda
The sun skims upon the long drapes
An alarm blares six aaaa.mmmm.  In red block letters
The sink whooshes out water and clank closes
The toilet wails and twirls in water in splish-splashing   
Children wake up screaming and laughing
Drip-drip-drop, drip-drip-drop, drip-drip-drop
Goes the coffee machine
Vroom, vroom, ieer the cars moves on
Dam-dum-dam-dum
The washing machine  
Engages in a tango and a mambo with soap, water, and clothes
Click the TV turns on
Drat the stove is on
Clank all the post go as she cooks rice, beans, or chicken
The day moves on with a thunderous house

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:iconknight-of-sand:
knight-of-sand Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the watch, my dear friend :hug::heart:!!
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Normk777 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
you're welcome
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Ethrus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch my good sire. ^v^ Greatly appreciated.
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plexusdynasty Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thank you for the watch :love:
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BeatIsMurder Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the watch!
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Normk777 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
you're welcome
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Xx-BlackNinja-xX Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thnx 4 fav :
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ScarPath358 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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Normk777 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
you're wlecome
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BiVelo Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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